随着少儿英语培训的普及程度提高，英语本土化写作已经成为每个学习英语的孩子的必选项。可是，市面上上海儿童英语的写作模式让那些本身就选择综合症的家长又找不到标准和方向感。毕竟我们的孩子不是本土长大的，我们孩子的父母也不是本土长大的，写成啥样才算符合标准呢？孩子的写作怎样才算有所提高了呢？我们心中充满了猜疑和困惑。

所以咱们先看看下面这个，以百度搜索来的范文为例：

IamTony.Ihaveacomputer.Ihaveanewfriend.HisnameisJack.Heis12yearsold.Heisastudent.Helikessurfingthenet.Weoftentalkwitheachotherinthechatroom.WetalkinEnglish.MyEnglishisgoodnow.Heisagoodboy.Ilikehimverymuch.Doyouwanttohaveanetfriend?

然后你回家看看孩子的英语小文章，是不是和这个很像，如果长得像，就是典型学校教育培养出的chinglish标准啦，恭喜你，成为标准的内容空洞没创意，用词太common没特色的坏典型。。。千万别认为我在嘲笑你，我只是忍不住因为自己说了这句话感到好笑。

OK,无论如何有点英语造诣，或者有过一些阅读量的孩子会写成下面这个样子：

Myfatherlikestodrinksomejuiceonthebeach.Sunshine,sea,beachandspamakeupabeautifulpicture.Andhelikestorowaboatinthesea.Hethinksitisromantic.

Mymotherlikestotravelinsomecities.Shewalksonwidestreetsandgoesshoppinginsomeshops.Ifshe’stired,shecansitonabench.Shethinksitisverynice.

Iliketoplayinfarmsbecausetherearelotsofanimals.Ilikeridinghorsesandplayingwithdogs.Thecowsinthefarmscanmakealotofmilk.Itisverydeliciousandhealthy.Afarmerisfunny.Hecantelljokesverywell.“Ha,ha,ha…”Weoftenlaughalot.

Beach,cityandfarm.Whichonedoyoulikebest?

Yesterday,myfather,mymotherandIplayedhide-and-seekwithmylittlebrother,Tom.

WhenTomhascountedfortwominutes,hebegantolookforus.Mymotherwasbehindacar.ButheriPhoneinherpolkadotsbriefcaserang.SoTomsawher.Myfatherwasnexttomymother.AndTomsawhim,too.

Howaboutme?Iputonablackandgreenstripedcoatandgreengloves.Isatdowninawatermelonfarmtomakemyselflooklikeawatermelon.

LittleTomcouldn’tseeme.Hewalkedtothewatermelonfarm.IthoughthecouldeasilyseemebecauseIwasbigger.Suddenly,Ihadanidea.Ibumpedmyyellowshoestoatree.Tomheardthatvoice.Herantothetree.WhenTomsawtheywerejustmyshoes,hewasangry!AndIranawayquickly.

文中出现了一定的基础词汇，而且表达更有新意，用词也更加精确。亮点在创意比较新颖，名词，形容词使用更加精确。Delicious,hide-and-seek,briefcase,striped。还有小部分动词的使用有一定灵活性row,bump。体现了孩子有一定的词汇量，能在上海少儿英语培训班写作中精确输出。

但是但是，下面这篇是不是看起来更靓？

PirateShip2.AdventuresinNeverland.

MyJourneyonaPirateShip2.AdventuresinNeverland（2015.09.20）

Afterabout15minutes,wefinallygotinNeverland.It'sahugeislandwherethebirdsaresinging,andthetreesaredancing.Theyreallymakeushappyanddon'twanttogetout.ThenCaptainHooksays,"Don'ttrustthebirdsandthetrees.Theyarejustmagicalthings.They'recursedbyPeterPan.Theydonotlooklikethisatall.Panjustwantstokeepthekidshere.""Soyoureallyareapirate?"Iask,"Butifyouare.Whydoyourobthingsinsteadofhelpingkids?""Well.Iusedto."Hooksayssadly,"Butthensomethingbadhappened."Hookdrinkssometeaandstartstalking,"Ihadanolderbrotherbefore.Oneday,wecomehere,Neverland,torobthings.AlthoughwehaveheardabouthowwonderfulNeverlandis,wedidn'tfindanytreasure.Wewerethirstyandhungry.Thenakindlookingboycameoutofthewoodsandsaidthathe'dliketohelpus.Weweresurprisedandaskedwherethetreasuresare.Theboytoldusthatthereisnotreasure.Hesaidthathehasbeenlivinghereforyears.Mykindbrotherbelievedhim.Ithoughttheboywasweird,soIasked,'Whydon'tyouleave?"Hesaidthathewantstohelppeoplegettingout.HealsotoldusthatNeverlandlandisdark.Hesaidthatthereisonlytwowaystogetout:GetthepasswordfromtheDarkKingofNeverland,ordrinkthemagicwaterfall'swater.Soheledustothewaterfall.Mybrotherdrankthewater.Thentheboylaughedinacreepyvoice,thenhesaidthattheonewhodrankthewatermuststayinNeverlandforhiswholelife.WefoundoutthatwehavebeentrickedbytheboywhosenameisPeterPan.Hekilledmydearbrother!IamluckytoescapebecauseIdidn’tdrinkthewater.Fromthenon,Ipromisedtotakemyrevengeandsavethekids!"

很有意思吧？大改彼得潘和胡克船长的恩仇史。创意只是其中一个亮点，更多的亮点来自于对于从句的意识，句型句式更丰富而且复杂。连词的排布和使用让整个故事情节看起来紧凑而且符合逻辑。其中的动词使用也很丰富，curse,betricked,takerevenge.这篇显然又进了一个层级，在表达上比上篇更加成熟且native一点。

最后，很多家长都希望能够有效提高孩子的英语写作能力，现在特地精选一家上海少儿英语培训机构：

上海新东方泡泡少儿教育

泡泡少儿英语是新东方集团下的少儿英语培训品牌。泡泡少儿英语成立于2004年，致力于为4到14岁的少儿提供一站式的教学服务。目前在多个城市建立起超过480个学习中心，累计学员300多万人。泡泡（POP）是PlayOurPlay的简称，意思是从玩当中学习，学习中发现玩的乐趣。新东方泡泡少儿英语为孩子们提供良好的服务教育，让孩子轻松学习，有新的价值观，发现学习中的乐趣。

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